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by moirasfate

person Persy
schedule January 11, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Sexy and hot AF!!!!

person Persy
schedule September 4, 2021 at 12:00 AM

What a most beautiful love story!!!!

person Persy
schedule June 16, 2021 at 12:00 AM

What a beautiful love story. Loved the power struggle.

schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I liked it alot
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A truly phenomenal piece of work if ever I've read one. The way they struggled for dominance, they way you characterized his fear and love for her through his angry outbursts was sensational. At first it almost played out like an exhilarating forced rape, but so amazingly did it spiral, building and raging like the fire between them. I am most impressed with your work here and commend you on it thusly. My congratulations on a fine piece of literature well crafted.

~CC
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person ismene5
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a lovely story.
I wish there would be more.
person nastygrl
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was just soo good! The stubborness, the fear, the passion, the double edge of it all, was perfect!