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for Rivaling Affections

by Digitallace

schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Nicely written, and I really like their interaction so far. Can't wait to see where you take this.
person ZooArmy
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great idea, with them knowing what andromeda was planning. update soon, please.
person Absence
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I am blown away by the severe complexity that suddenly and smoothly flows through your story and your writing. I cant wait to read more!
person Dezra
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, it would be easy for colleagues not to see each other very often, but it wouldn't add to the story if they didn't interact. I think that Andromeda had other ideas when she sent Harry to Draco, other than offering a teaching position. I am enjoying the story idea. I hope that Draco isn't too much of a bastard. I like Draco with an attitude...just not one that's overdone. It sounds like these two can be civil when they have to be. Great story so far.
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next one!
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 3!!!
person Jilliane
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 1)

Honestly, I don't know how you manage to keep all your WIP's straight in your head! I admire that sort of organised mind. Nice start to this. I'm looking forward to some Harry/Draco rivallry banter, and to see what Teddy's part will be in this. You're an impressive updater, so I won't ask you to update soon, just say that I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol. can't wait for the next chapter
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 2!!
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a wonderful start. It's nice to see a story where Teddy actually LIVES with his Godfather, I mean, In all the stories that I've read where it's SEMI-Canon, Teddy's with Andromeda alone, or with the Weasley's as well. Thank you. Please update soon.



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