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for Rivaling Affections

by Digitallace

person reid
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the velveteen rabbit.... that's a good choice for harry why did you pick it
person cravedom
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let me see; the man is handsome, has a beautiful home and bakes. Yes I agree he would be an terrible boyfriend. Some people just need to be slapped.

Darn I did not know pie could be so sexy.
person Dezra
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So is Andromeda and McGonagall in the matchmaking business now? It seems to be working well.
person char_marcus
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story ,i've read a few of yours and they are all great can't wait for next update :)
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*grins madly* looks like draco's falling. i lve harry's house and the fact that it smells like apple pie. i can almost smell that pie as i read
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 4!
person ZooArmy
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahh the sexual tension is figuratively jumping in your face and frotting it. LOL ah the mental image is bliss. rofl
anyway... you have no idea how much i love it when you can almost grab the tension between them. My mind's always like 'oh for christ's sake fuck already that we're all very, very happy' *cough*
person MewMew2
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good job. I love the way that you described the scenery with rooms and the kitchen/apple pie scene in particular. Highly descriptive, very well done. This seems like a very promising story. Please keep up the good work!
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
our boys are so cute when they bicker
person LadyofCarom
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh, I like it a lot! Can't wait for chapter 3!