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for Rivaling Affections

by Digitallace

schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehe. sevie's back! yay!
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yummy. so what does harry have an excess of power he doesn't want draco getting hurt by?
person cravedom
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah well after reading Chasing it all makes more sense. The story did feel like it had jumped but I though it was due to my short atention span.

You know I can see why Draco would hate Harry, everybody always loves Harry and Draco is just ignored; he really needs some affection. I hope the students and staff do not snub him.
person Sara
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG That was one of the best stories ever! I love it! I hope you update soon! Oh wait I just looked and you updated today. Sorry. But still I can't wait for more!
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Harry. Secrets don't make friends...or in this case boyfriends.
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can i have it now? please?!!!!!! i loved the chap!
person cravedom
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wao the proverbial last meal, they even had lamb; Harry sure has a flair for drama. We have a secret too! I love secrets and we know Draco is going to snoop around until he figures it our. Yaay!
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a cute story! :) I like the way you describe their utter amazement and fascination with each other. Teddy is an absolute darling, and I love how he waltzes into many of these conversations. lol I'm looking forward to their time as teachers. I was a bit surprised when Harry suddenly went to "chastly kissing" Draco, after a chapter where you descibed the beginnings of attraction, but overall the transitions have been smooth. The elder ladies being so plotty is pretty funny too. Nice job so far.
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 7!!! What will Draco do now?
person MewMew2
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Please send that tart to the workplace please, and have it airmailed as well. I love how you described the chocolate tart, melted milk chocolate and raspberry do taste divine together. Especially if baked in a packet of phyllo dough. Thanks for the warning beforehand as well, although it more so gave me the urge to bake than to eat. You did a wonderful job on this chapter and on updating in a timely fashion. Please do so again when you find the time.