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for A Muddy Secret

by GammaOrionis

person Rosamund
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very awesome...I hope Lady Nimue recognizes Hermione for being brilliant and more ;)
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I can see how that would make her angry with him. Well, I would personally like to see both sequels as a kind of either or thing as you said. And I am torn between wanting a longish journey and a short one so they get to Lady Nimue faster so whatever you decide is just wonderful with me.
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting story so far! i enjoyed reading it. please e-mail me at ohsnap_theresa@yahoo.com when you update! thank you!!! i'd really appreciate the gesture!
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
person Avanell
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! And adventure is afoot!!! Can't wait...will they get closer during their travels? ;)
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sO THE PROBLEM IN YOUR HANDS IS PROBABLY CARPLTUNNEL....MY MOM HAS THE SAME THING HER HANDS GO NUMB AND IT HURTS HER SO MUCH....YOU MIGHT WANT TO GET IT CHECKED OUT. AWSOME STORY....I LIKE WHERE ITS HEADING.

C.P.I.G.
person Utopia
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nah! Lockheart was a Dumbledore wanabe! Not a patch on the old guy! Dumbles can look a twit in fewer words but still be respected! Yeah, JKR was real with the bullies, but she painted them as something good - a very bad thing.

Duckie, I think that avoiding the docs is a bad thing - maybe they can help?

Yeah, my pillow breathes too - it also snores and squeaks in the night! lol! I think the best case of that was a musician friend of mine who crashed on the sofa of another friend. At the time, furry cushions were all the rage, so my friend got comfy... he woke at three in the morning with his head scratched to ribbons thanks to a very p**ed off cat! lol!

So, Dumbles and Malfoy are related? Oooh.

schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fun fun fun
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, don't play with your health! The issues with your hand can be related to a lot of nasty stuff! Not that I can't understand you, I hate doctors myself and avoid them whenever possible, but still...

With that chapter you left me a bit lost I must admit. I have no clue where it is heading right now! I obviously get that there are some "greats" missing before grandmother, but what the heck has she to do with it? Oh, I am wondering! But they are moving to the forest of the Dean. That has to mean something, but I still don't get it. Aaarrg...

As for Sev: I certainly agree with you! I do picture him more as some poor abused (or at least neglected) child starving for affection, too. And that without even knowing what he's starving for! I can really picture Hermione becoming kind of a surrogate mum for him. Or maybe older sister, considering that they are only about 5 years apart during that time...

But I deduce from your comment that you're devilishly scheming to tear Hermione and Lucius apart! That's soooooo mean! (That's my softy-side screaming there *LOL*) So, as I said, you got me curious there, waiting for the next update already! Good job, once again!
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I liked the part where Lucius revealed that Albus is related to him. I think Hermione made a mistake by making an oath to protect Lucius, what would happen if she returns to her time.