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This was an excellent chapter. I look forward to reading the next one to see what happens.

interesting! ^_^ :D love it :D

me wants more like always :D lol

Chapter 15: Ah, poor Lucius. He is like most children - they really never give up on wanting their parents to love them. It was a short, but fraught road trip. I

Chapters 13-14: So they

Oh yes, if you continue like that there better be a sequel! *Look Really Threatening* I read your answer to Utopia, and really, you should go see a doctor. I know I sound like my mum, but a friend of mine had the same problem with her arm, and lets just say, her diagnosis was not pleasant.

So I still don't really know where this is going - but at least we (and Hermione) get to know some stuff about Lucius. It's good that you let them have some time on their own, they deserve it! Plus, I think the better she knows his "other" side the more likely she will fall in love...

I think there will be more happening at his grandmothers than just getting the timeturner sand for Dumbeldore, am I right? Hummm... Just wondering! As always, without pressuring: already waiting for the next tidbit to read! ;-)

Don't know why I didn't think of this...have you gone over to Granger Enchanted? I'm an author over there...would love to refer you if no one else hasn't :D

My doc made me laugh, he gave me the third degree because I DIDN'T want to go to med school! He thought I'd make a brill GP and was acting more like an advert for his profession than actually doing his job of prodding at me! lol! The NHS doesn't try to diagnose you with something you haven't got because the NHS is free at the point of use (you pay tax to fund it, not a bill when you leave); if they diagnose you with something you don't have - then they're wasting precious pounds by doing so.

English class? You uni student?

You know, I always thought that the sword of Gryffindor was Excalibur... I was gutted in the last book when the goblins claimed it! I didn't half sulk.

You know, Lady Nemune sounds quite nice, if she's saying the SECOND best moment of her life is her story; second to the FIRST rank of having children... she sounds quite motherly and proud of her offspring. Oh good grief, I'm going broody - someone slap me quick! I like children as much as Snape does!

Darling, darling... repeat after me: 'Plot devices' and 'character development' Boring is such a BAD word, use the above words instead! Trick of the trade (not that we make any money, that would be plagiarism for real, rather than quasi-plagiarism).

Hope you feel better duckie. *Hugs down the internet cable*

well i totally love the idea of two different sequel endings! i really love that you would even do it, totally cool! :) i do like the chapter not everyone of the chapters have to have so problem or adventure--so no worries. :) i wonder what will happen on the next day and if they do get to the lake and the Lady therein what will happen i wonder? :) well try not to keep us in too much sucsepence. until then!

HEHE.....Got to love the underlying tones of "Yes, were going to get fucked with"

Excellent couple of chapters. I like that Lady Nimue is coming into the picture. Now is Hermione being in the past changing anything in the future, or will the future have to play out to the present??? Makes no sense does it??.. LOL.. well regardless, you have me hooked although stating that there will be a sequel probably means that we will not get the resolution we want here.. which in my case is smexy Lucius/Hermione lovin'... ; )