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Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.

*Squeals* Ok, I know I have been incredibly spoiled by getting two chapters so quickly... but I can't wait for more. Pretty, pretty please! This chapter is a horrible cliffhanger and I really must know what happens. ;)



I really like Lady Nimue and I'd love to see her in future chapters. Its really kinda depressing that Hermione will be going back soon, but then again I can see things being very interesting between her and the older Lucius. Deliciously interesting. Although I must admit the idea of Hermione and the younger Lucius getting some fun in would be nice because I just love the idea of Hermione having him before Narcissa ever did. (Is that terrible of me?)

Oh dear... that ending w/ Chapter 18 was unexpected. I sure hope she doesn't hide the letter she wrote for Lucius (or destroy it) now that she's seen his Dark Mark. Mind you, she's always known, so I'm not sure why she had such a huge reaction. Either way, great work! I can't wait for the future.

I guess I stand corrected~ there will be a huge lack of understanding for both Lucius and Hermione. I was not expecting her to react that way or to even tell Lucius in that fashion, but you are the author and so a creative, artistic license must be granted. :::grumbling:::
I can only hope now that this story will come to a pleasantly civil ending based on her reaction, cause anything that happens in the past greatly affects the future.
One final thing~ I love time-turner fics, and I love how you painted your picture with your words. I really hope that Hermione is sent off after saying goodbye to the ones that matter most. In most time-turner fics, the author will have Hermione tragically transported back to her time, and it would be highly refreshing to see if she is sent back amiably.

I understand your pain. I don't do well with things that have more than four legs. So I am sending you giant bear hugs.....and a large can of pesticide and a bull whip. That should just about cover all your bases. lol Great update, I can't wait for more!!

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The only grasshoppers I'Ve seen so far are small but I know that there are huge animals out there.

As for the story. Really cool. I like Nimue. On Friday they've shown Merlin (with Sam Neil) on TV again and I watched it. And I was reminded of your storiy somehow. But I don't know how...;)
However, keep writing and I'll keep reading.^^

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Ah, the first rule of being a beta is that you have to read it weather you agree with it or not. For example: There are a lot of crap betas out there who refuse to edit stuff because they don't think X should be paired with Y... I've had some really odd pairings sent to me in the past - that I don't like - and I've edited it none the less. I've read a lot of stuff, and I can give an opinion regardless of weather I like it or not - actually, its better if I DON'T like it because then I'm more impartial. Send it over, and tell me what you want from me and I'll do my best for you!

I'm scared of Daddy long legs! I scream and run away. Bella's the only HP female who's got balls. lol. Good job too, because if Voldie's regeneration spell couldn't produce a NOSE, then what hope did his genetalia have? Someone has to have a pair among the Death Eaters! lol!

Oooh, my beta and I (yep someone betas the beta) were having a very "grown up" discussion, here's the scenario: Does LM look better in (a) the Leather Death Eater armour? (b) Naked as the day he was born? (c) doing a striptease from the leather Death Eaterness to nakedness? (d) Naked, but with a few bits of leather for effect... we didn't draw a conclusion on that debate.

Grandma Cuddles! They're as bad as baby photos for embarrassment!