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for A Muddy Secret

by GammaOrionis

person Apple
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
erm..........

All i can say is... pls oh pls oh pls post the next chapter soon.......


person Citten
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
of course we didnt. :) (hehehehehehehe) i do totally agree with you on the halloweeen movies though but i also love the mel brooks ones of halloween. :) they are funny! though i am a big fan of dracula movies too. well this is all going a lot fast then i thaugh you were going to go. i was hoping that they would get to descuss things a little more in the past but apprentally you have something else planned. but i am totally along for the ride i cant wait to see how lucius is going to react in this time and now. oh i am so excited! :)
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
shivers.....scary...I like it....
person Utopia
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so she's back now. That was rather anti-climatic! I was expecting something else... don't know what though, but something spectacular.

So, does she drive Lucius to becoming the 'big bad' because she left him and all hatred of muggleborns stems from her rejecting him as a person because of his Dark Mark - a Dark Mark he never wanted to take in the first place... and if that isn't dodgey psychology, then I don't know what is! I read something similar (to what I just said, that is) in another Sev/Hermione back in time, oh the irony; Hermione was sent back in time to set things to rights and keep Sev on the 'light side of life'; but when she leaves for her own time, Sev spirals into a depression and ends up joining the Death Eaters and doing all the nasty stuff because she left him! I was in tears with that fic!

I'll send you the opening chapters of my back in time, though I want another 2 chaps before I think about posting it (and for this to be complete and have rested a bit so it doesn't look like I'm trying to steal the limelight from you).

person Shetan
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story.....
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
JESUS CHRIST WOMAN!!!

These chapter what I have missed have been fantastic!

Now she's back in her own time, and lucious Luci is there....Hmmm....If it were me I'd jump him LOL

But alas it's not...So you are a fan of Bella eh? ME TOO!!! She's the best Death Eater ever! Well female one anyway, after my Luci and Sevvie!

So we are nearing an end...BOOO. But there will be more right? *Bats eyelashes* Pretty please? I'll send my Draco bot round to see you if you gimme morrrre LOL

Brilliant, Brilliant, Brilliant!!!

~LadyVoldemort87~
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think she'd better get her tail back where she belongs, pronto. AND she used Voldie's assumed name rather than his public un-name, which is going to cause Lucius some twitches, I imagine. Good cliffie.
person Mehuh
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHAt?!?!? NOO! T.T This is why it makes me sad to read unfinished stories..... I get so hooked... and I HAVE TO WAIT!! *tear* I'm not even sure if I'll find this fic again!!
I will. I am determined!
I really liked this story, if you couldn't tell. XD
person andarte
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You and the friends that live in your head are doing a very good job! ;)
person jaimelee
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww.... poor Lucius!! She needs to give him a chance to explain.