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for A Muddy Secret

by GammaOrionis

schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update. Poor Lucius. He's gonna have to convince Hermione first. LOL I can't wait for more!
person Citten
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
and so it starts---he will have her! but we knew that. :) we are off to a wonderful start. it will be interesting to see how things unfold with the others she knows in history. i cant wait to see how the gryindors treat her outside a classroom. ;) i will say that she is very stubborn! i makes me want to hit her, she is being so stuck-up! most women irratate me when they are like that. well i cant wait to see how you brerak her of that! :) or maybe it is lucius that will have that honor. ;) oh! i just had a thaught how is muganagal (?)going to treat her?! i will be waiting to see that. :) but she needs to start giving him a chance or he might become a deatheater just to get her. :) now there is a thaught. do update soon my dear! and i will be happy to help anyway and anytime i can. :)
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes. The Pimp Cane. So important it deserves the caps. lol Great update, I can totally see Lucius just being baffled by the fact that Hermione could just care less. I can't wait for more!
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story. I can't wait to read more.
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww :) nice story hehe :)

wanna read more =D
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
See I had the same thing...Myself and my man Voldemort were blissfully happy, until the Potter brat killed him LMAO...*sigh* It's always the good ones who die =(

This was a great chapter, love the way she is ignoring him LOL. Keep thinking about the end of this story though...Will she end up as Draco's mother? The mind boggles LOL.

Looking forward to more!

~LadyVoldemort87~
person Mia
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I'm thrilled you updated so soon. Made me smile when I needed one. Thanks.

~Mia~
person Citten
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am so happy to read another chapter! hey i am glad that you were honest at least i have no false sense of security. but i will say that even if it is not regular updates that is okay i just hope that you will not abondon this story i love it so! :) so you have a general idea where you want it to go so that is great and i will try and be as helpful as i can--so i will tell you what if promise to try and not give up on the story i will make sure i always review and that if you need help or want and idea email me (princesscrystalcitten@yahoo.com) and i will try my best to help out. hey also even if you one update every so often is better than nothing or even none at all. beside i know how life and espiecally school! :) so i hope that helps. now for review of the chapter: Loved that dumbledor put her in slytherin, i love how you set up slytherin house (with them each having there own rooms and being able to walk into each others area), as loved lucius was and miffet that she is not completely swayed by him. ;) well that is usually always a recipe for attraction (sometimes on both sides.) i als cant wait to see the chanllenge between them cause you know it will happen cause she is an acheaver too. :) and i think it will be fun to see how dear old lucius will handle it and react! until next chapter or email. :) hope to read or hear from you soon!!!!!!!!!!! :)
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay it's official. I'm hooked. And I like how you're writing Lucius. Like he's just fully coming into his arrogance. It's kind of like Lucius of Hermione's minus the cynicism and immediate condescension. Though he seems to be perfectly capable of such. And I'm babbling. The short of the long is....I like it and I can't wait for more!
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!