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I wish you lots of ramen! I love this pairing, most especially the time turner ones
-- there are so few out there :(

Enjoyed reading this so much, I LOL when I got to the part where Hermione punished
The Marauders. I hate bullies and I have a soft spot for Severus. I hope you write
more of him with Hermione in a older sister, close friend or mothering capacity :D

Thank you for sharing this, and I look forward to the next update :)

I love Lucius' huge ego; reminds me of a guy I knew in high school. I think Hermione in Slytherin is a good means of letting ehr see some of their lives from their point of view. More, Please?

that was awesome!

oh plz i want more =D

hehehe its so funny to read Lucius freting so much over Hermione lol :D

Oohhh... spending the day together at Hogsmead this should be interesting. And your an angel for updating so soon!

So he's finally chippin away at the ol' hard Hermione surface, eh? LOL

I'm a brit too, yay for me =D

Can't really not like James...He was a complete pig for being horrible to our Sevvie, but I must admit I do have a James/Hermione in the works at the moment....I hope you'll like him when I come to post it!

I just LOVE LOVE LOVE Lucius in this...He's so like Draco! And I love Draco....YAY your doing a sequel! *claps* I'm excited!

Post more soon!

~LadyVoldemort87~

Ooooh... this is interesting! The chapters are quite short - but they flow nicely from one to the other and keep the pace!

I've got a back in time LM/HG in the pipeline, actually, it's been in the pipeline since I sat in last year's exams at uni waiting to be dismissed! lol!

I'll give it several months before posting mine, this [your fic] deserves some serious limelight. The plots are so very different, but some little things (Hermione supposedly from Beauxbatons) are too similar for my liking and it looks like plagiarism to me (even though fanfiction is really just plagiarism with a disclaimer at the beginning, all said and done; but as a reader I hate to see a plot repeated over and over). I'll do some severe re-working so it doesn't look like I'm a copycat. I've another story to finish first to give me some thinking time. I don't mean to offend with what I've written, I just thought it was good manners to mention something about my plans for a back in time fic.

If you want to get in contact: utopia_beta@hotmail.co.uk

Chapters 1-3: This is very inventive and the dynamic between Hermione and the younger Lucius is quite entertaining. He's at once less subtle and more overtly demanding of his due. All in all, a simpler version who hasn't yet been tested by any real adversity. I like Hermione's handling of him. She isn't nasty to him, just businesslike. He is the only one translating her actions as playing hard-to-get. Unfortunately, it acts as an irresistible goad for Head Boy Lucius to conquer her. That should be fun to watch. She's no one's pushover.

My only request is that you finish the story. Too many authors fizzle and don't finish, eagerly rushing to start something they haven't any plan for.

I don't think anyone replied about italics. I use the "Input text" section in the Authors Panel when I add chapters. Within that text box, italics will work if you use HTML coding. See this URL for an example of how to make italics work using HTML coding. It's very simple.

http://www.htmlcodetutorial.com/_I.html

That should work for you.

I loved this chapter =D

Loved how Hermione stood up for Sevvie, and hexed James Potters arse! Go Mione! The little brat needed telling once and for all. *growls* Stupid Potters...

And Luci wants to marry her LMAO, now he's a fella who knows what he wants LOL. Please tell me...*batts eyelashes* Is she gonna have any little Malfoys? Hehe, I hope so!

This was a brilliant chapter and I throughly enjoyed it!

~LadyVoldemort87~

This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.