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Wonderful action packed story. I feel like screaming now that I have reached the end and it is not the end. Aaarrrggg! What happens now? I am going to go to your Author's Page and see what you have been up to.

So, I am back! As I promised, I would review when I had the possibility, here you go! Only for you I spend saturday afternoon in the library (well, not quiet true, but since I crashed my computer this is the only way for me to review right now...).

I think I left you round chapter 16, right? So I will start there then! Your Lady Nimue was really delightful. The way she tells off Lucius and aparently all of her grandchildren? Oh, that was so much fun reading... And what is the problem she's talking about in chapter 16? When she tells that she certainly can send Hermione home? Will that one be solved in one of the sequels? I certainly hope so!

Chapter 17 was so cosy and tame that I should have known that you would let out your evilly side in the next one! Really, you are evil, but that I already told you... But you did a very good job in planting doubts in Lucius once again. He really could have figured out what Hermione was telling him. At least come to the conclusion that there was more behind it than that!

The next one... You started it out sooooo nicely and heart warming. He's so sweet when trying to get out of her if she might be interested in marrying him! Goodness, and Hermione having a penchant for older guys? Snape? Lupin? Ohhhhhh I can so see that! Well, at least for Snape, Lupin is not really my thing so to speak - I don't know, him and Sirius beeing James' friends? Well, for me it just doesn't fit with Hermione plus I really see him with Tonks! But that's actually not the point I am trying to make (rambling on and on...)Well, it was a nice move, smoothing out the way for any future endeavors. But then you ended it so cruelly! Really, how could you? Well, I already left my opinion on it, it broke my heart, poor Lucius!

And than you let her disapear in the next chapter. Without reconciliation, nothing at all! She even met his father. Ohhhh... He couldn't even bring her to listen. Stupid Hermione. How could she not see that he had it hard for her! Is it right to assume that she used a timeturner? I almost missed the part where she received it. I had to reread the part when she was in the meeting with Dumbeldore... I really had no time to read the chapters carefully at the seminar I was attending...

So, as for the last chapter. I had the impression that Lucius did not quiet get what actually happened? I mean it is impossible, since it was him who send her back, but then he should know that she couldn't possibly know that they had met in HIS past before? He was quiet upset with her... Hmmm... Oh, I am so waiting to see how the sequels will develop! Yay... I really liked your story, though there are still a few questions I was asking myself.

1. The beast? You didn't explain that one yet, did you? Will it be of importance in one of the sequels?
2. Lady Nimues parting words: I will see you after the NEWTS child. Was she talking to Lucius or Hermione? It wasn't quiet clear, I think. That might have been intended, am I right?

Oh, and I hope your medication worked? Is your arm better now? Let me know, I will move on to the sequel rigth now! Thank you again for this delightful story.

Just read chapter 2. Good writing but wasn't Armando Dippet headmaster at this time??? Dumbledore was a professor maybe?

I must admit to not really thoroughly reading this story. It does help that I got hooked on it after midnight and had a midterm at 9:30am which I was attempting to study for. So while I have officially read the entire thing, I'll probably go back later and read it a little more in depth. It was really good though and I can't wait for the sequel.

Just caught up...can't wait for the sequel!!! E-mail me if need be...I'll be out of town for a few days :( Well, it's a fun conference so :)

OMG!! I can't believe you left us all hanging like that! Poor Lucius - ignored for 26 years! Although, I suppose if he wasn't such a bastard to her years earlier, maybe things wouldn't beo so bad now... though, why does Hermione have to be so stubborn?? Please write the next part soon!

You're right, hopes and expectations are two different things, and I will admit that they do seem to get confused with one another. So now that every thing has simply flipped over, what do you plan to do with dear Lucius and Hermione. They techically did not have a physical relationship, to me it looked more emotionally driven and unacted upon in some degrees, so in that case what are you going to do???

*sob* *sob*

u'r evil..........

but then......... i wanna be Lucius' too...........

Noooo!!!!! Not a cliffy *sobs* Authors can be so cruel sometimes T_T I'm going through withdrawal right now, you know. Lack of Lucius makes me very antsy/cranky. I must say, however, that leaving the story off where you have was a very Bella-like thing to do. Now all I have to do is focus on classes until I can get more Lucius ^_^ I hope he forgives her, eventually... Oh! I almost forgot: Why was Lucius speaking to Hermione about their (present)history together (Flourish and Blotts, the World Cup, the Ministry, etc.) as if, at those times, she would have remembered going back in time (even though it hadn't happened to her yet)? That was slightly confusing. It seemed to me as if he felt she'd been purposefully "forgetful" of their time together...even though she'd been a kid and couldn't possibly remember it (again, because it hadn't happened). Maybe I just missed something (wouldn't be the first time ^_^).

Noooo!!!!! Not a cliffy *sobs* Authors can be so cruel sometimes T_T I'm going through withdrawal right now, you know. Lack of Lucius makes me very antsy/cranky. I must say, however, that leaving the story off where you have was a very Bella-like thing to do. Now all I have to do is focus on classes until I can get more Lucius ^_^ I hope he forgives her, eventually... Oh! I almost forgot: Why was Lucius speaking to Hermione about their (present)history together (Flourish and Blotts, the World Cup, the Ministry, etc.) as if, at those times, she would have remembered going back in time (even though it hadn't happened to her yet)? That was slightly confusing. It seemed to me as if he felt she'd been purposefully "forgetful" of their time together...even though she'd been a kid and couldn't possibly remember it (again, because it hadn't happened). Maybe I just missed something (wouldn't be the first time ^_^).