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for A Muddy Secret

by GammaOrionis

schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's so sad that Lucius received such indifference from his own father...the apple doesn't fall far from the tree does it? The fact that he never got to know his own mom and his father practically hated him for her death is just so tragic.

Given the circumstances though, I don't blame Hermione one bit for ignoring Lucius. I think she needs to hex him badly (or perhaps punch him in the face again) before she can fully get her anger out of her system.

Thanks for the interesting chapter! You are very good at writing angst, although I hope that you work through you own angsty period soon so you can get back to the hot UST that exists between the two of them.

I've immensly enjoyed the last few chapters...must be the sadist in me, loving Lucius' misery. Looking forward to more.
MHS
person Kerima
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
... =/....
Updates? Please?
I'll fedex you some bacon?
So far this is a great story =).
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please oh please oh please update SOON!! Ack! I have to know what happens next!! (I really loved this chapter in case you hadn't noticed. lol)
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! =D

of course, this chapter was just as awesome as others even better :O

i imagined it in my head lol xD specially the slap =P ikes :P

hoping to read more! =D
person Shetan
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a marvelous chapter. Please update soon...
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was reluctant to read this at first... But I am so glad I started reading it anyways! It's great! Update soon, please...
person Citten
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was just a perfect chapter in everyway. first how she worked the conversation at a)breakfast and b) while in hogsmeade. next how they spent their day and how enjoyable most of the day was. :) the kiss was spectacular--i want one!--loved the love bite, mark. ;) but boy did he scrwe up! i love and yet cant believe she hit him. though i love that she did, he diserved it! though i now am going to be drolling waiting for the next chapter! (and i really wanted to see where you unicorns would be! :( will you?) poor lucius is going to be so clueless as to why.
Sorry about not reviewing chapter five crazy weekend and did not get a chance to. i will say though i love how everyone reacted to her handy work! :) i also loved that lucius was being chivleraous about carrying her bag and i really loved that he kind of loves being bossed by her! :)
please update soon as you can!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter....some of it was what i thought may happen...once again im not spoiling the story for outside reviewers xxx 10/10
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I think that Lucius will have a difficult time getting Hermione now. I can't believe that she punched him. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what happens.
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ROFL, so he felt the business end of her wand hey? LOL I can't believe she slapped him! Go 'Mione!

Oh I know it's his birthday =D I LOVE HIM, He's my favourite character apart from my Voldie. Hehe.

Feel a little sorry for Hermione, she must be so upset, but poor Luci doesn't know what he's done wrong, I can imagine how confused he is.

I've just had the delight of tasting my first twinkie LOL, and I loved it...Reeses Pieces too....God....I so wanna move to NYC. Although I do love Britain, historical and all that LOL

Anyway my darling, this chapter was brilliant, and I cannot wait for your update!

~LadyVoldemort87~