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Oh! She hit him so hard that a forensics person could get her fingerprints off his cheek!

Oh, he deserved it!

There's absolutely nothing wrong with writing to purge some of RL's angst. I do it alot myself.

Although it was short, it was a good chapter. I rather enjoyed seeing Lucius so flummoxed, not understanding what he did wrong (That moron! How could he NOT know! Oh, wait he's a man...of course he's not gonna know!)
And then to see him lose his cool when someone hexed him behind his back...loved that!

Looking forward to seeing how this will play out!
MHS

Ive said a million times that writing is like therapy without the fees....dont apologize for working out emotion through words, it can be very powerful and it can make for great writing at times. The story I am most proud of came out of a period of depression.


Yes, it was a might short but thats alright, not every chapter can be lengthy. It was emotional and angry and showed how the situation made her feel and her frustration. Great job!


Happy Writing!
S_G

So, Severus returned Hermione's favor? Good to have friends in low places! As an aside, Tom Felton is rumored to be studying Fisheries Management for his University Major, or whatever they call it in Britain.

This was a great chapter. I hope that Hermione will eventually tell Lucius why she is upset with him, even if she has to lie to him about certain things. I do think that she wants to be with him, but doesn't want him to treat people the way he does now. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Uh oh, they've fell out! Something like that must be so slip of the tongue for Lucius now, I almost don't think he know's what he's saying. Poor lamb =D (I love him can you tell? LOL)

Yeah, I've heard him singing, I've got the songs on my I-Tunes...Time Isn't Healing is my favourite.

I love the way Snape is sticking by her, I love a loyal Sevvie. Hehe.

I like a little angst, although most people don't I think it adds a little more ooomph to the story.

This was a bloody great chapter, and I love you Luci just a little more than I should LOL.

Looking forward to the next update!

~LadyVoldemort87~

1st- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (deep breath) i am better now. :) you are just too funny, i promise i do not want you to become like moody! :) but it was sure a funny thaught. :)

okay as to the chapter even though it was short, it was powerful-it showed her emotions beautifully. poor hermoine! :( well i do love how lucius would not even clean himself before he went to find her and all that happened to them in the hallway. boy severus was being very brave. i wonder how long will it take lucius to find out what he said wrong?
okay totally off the wall statement, but--why does no one think that maybe the reason they are in the past is because they were there before and just doing all that was done once before?! because face it lucius would not have sent her back if she had already been there before. though it may and will be different each time because of our choices, so she could change HOW things happen in the future or her future could lie in the past......................okay i am going to stop now or i never will. (sorry this was my mouth running-away without me so you dont have to respond to the last part here it was mostly for my benefit.)

thanks! :) see you soon!

Actually I must say I thought that chapter was perfect. It showed Lucius's confusion and Hermione's hurt and anger. I wonder what Lucius will do when he finds out that Hermione is so angry about his use of the "M" word. Great update, I can't wait for more!

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This was brilliant. I loved this chapter. You have nothing to fear about its quality. You are one of those wonderful writers who put forth thought and effort when setting out angst. I adored Severus' defense of Hermione. Did he do it because she was kind to him? Or because he was pissed at Lucius for knocking down Lily. Well, I naturally presume that the 4th year female Gryffindor was the Evans girl. Though short, this was my personal favorite chapter thus far. I can't wait for more. I am enjoying this story far more than I anticipated I would from your first chapter. The first convinced me that you might be a decent writer. Since then you have more than exceeded that expectation. My favorite parts are the interaction with Snape though. Poor guy needs a friend. I always feel bad for him. I expected him to just be a bitter, nasty person without any good reason before that pensieve. I always want to fix his sorry plight. Too bad he won't learn not to call women names from Lucius' experience. Tsk Tsk.

~Mia