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Chapter 6: Lovely Lucius was a clothes horse even as a teen, I see. Yummy-looking! He must have been born with a well-developed sartorial sense. I

Poor Lucius.....the flashbacks were well written....we know now where his anger stems from....more soon of this great story 10/10

Chapter 7: Short chapter, yes, but it packed a wallop. I

This was great. I think since Severus went to speak to Hermione that he should tell Lucius what she said about why she is angry. Then Lucius could tell her about his past and then maybe they could work things out and become a couple. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Good i dont think you should aulter chapter seven. excelent chapter! i could feel the angwish that you are convaning from them both espiceal lucius! poor poor lucius to be treated like that by your own father. (i do hope that is not what you ment--that you were treated the same way! for if it is i am sending you a huge hug and a shoulder if you need it! :)) but i hope that hermione is slowing getting that there is a deeper reason for all this. but i do have to agree with you on the fact that a)he is a male b)a slytherin--though a slow one but he will get it! (i hope) :) see you soon....or rather write and read you soon! :) i will be dying to see what happens!!!!!

Chapter 8: Sorry for not keeping up with your lightning updates. I

yep. definitely love the way you wrote about Lucius who needs Hermione... even for her attention. but then, i also hope that things will clear up soon.. it's so heart breaking seeing him like that....

I love the insight into Lucius. You actually managed to wrangle sympathy for Lucius from me. JK never managed that. But, oh how this chapter left me wanting the next one to be here already. I want everything happily fixed and ironed out, and to be independantly wealthy. Can you do that too? Thanks for this. It gets better and better.

~Mia

The chapter was nice... But I have to admit: Too short! :-( (Okay, I am only complaining because I want to read more of it!) I am curious to know if he will be able to wiggle himself out of it!

Smoked stuff tends to go as far as bacon, and ham. But there's toad in the hole, bubble and squeak, bangers and mash and spotted dick to get through!

Proper British! Are you DARING to suggest that the Yorkshire Accent ISN'T proper British? Are ya indeed? Are you saying that how Sean Bean speaks ISN'T sexy? (ignore Boramir, that's too posh - but in Sharpe it's spot on Yorkshire!) He's Mellers in the Lady Chatterley film adaptation! Seriously, plant me between Rickman and Bean having a chat and I'd be a puddle of aroused goo - even if they were discussing the weather or their shopping lists!

oh look! Italics!

Sign the marriage register! He doesn't talk Quidditch on a date! lol!

Is he related to Nimune then? Was one of the fathers of the children a Malfoy man? I think they'd be obsessed with their family history and roots - which is why LM knows so much... I should just keep reading shouldn't I! The curse of reviewing as I write is a bad one.

Awwww! It would have been funny for Lucius to see Hermione's knickers at this stage!

I always had the opinion that the Malfoy men, being practically wizarding royalty in their bloodline... that the lads would be packed of to a (very well paid) courtesan as soon as they were legal (presuming 17 for magical Brits, rather than 16 for the muggle ones). I can see Abraxas firmly telling Lucius not to take a witch to his bed until he'd been "broken in" and knew what to do in bed when he got there! Lucius probably knows more about how to pleasure a woman than how to pleasure himself!

Yessss! Someone's SLAPPED Malfoy! Finally!