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for A Muddy Secret

by GammaOrionis

schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh... They made up! Thank you so much! I couldn't stand them fighting, couldn't help but feel sorry for Lucius. Even if he's an arrogant prick! I am such a softy, I know. I can be angry at people, but not really resentful (in the sense of nachtragend since you seem to know a bit of German :-)). Not even in real life!

But you're a bit mean, letting us wait to see what it is he has to do... I am wondering if my assumptions were right? (No, you're right, I don't really want an answer until the story will tell it!)

If you ask me, you could have been a bit more graphic in the description of Lucius in his bath... Yummy, must be a delicious sight! Hmmm, well, it lets a lot of space for our own imagination!

Great update!
person Citten
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah! they are on the road of being forgiven! poor lucius, i think i know what is about to happen. well thinks are about to get really interesting and i wonder how will hermione will deal with everything! she better be good and understanding she could be his salvation. well guess i will just have to wait for the next chapter. though you are scaring me what is this sequel thing you are talking about!? you still have to finish this one! right? well dont get me wrong cause i love sequels be i will be waiting you to post before i freak. well that was sweet what she did for lucius! :) though poor remus. i like that she told him a little tid-bit! :)
person Shetan
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic, please update soon.
person Rosamund
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome...is he getting marked? I wonder how Hermione will react, if she sees...I'm sure she'll figure it out. Can she drop a hint if she does suspect/know?
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: I agree that Lucius never wanted Draco to be spoiled, just loved. (If you see any errors in my stuff, I
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10: Lucius is making a fast recovery when he discovers why Hermione was displeased. His attitude won
person Rosamund
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
short but wonderful chapter...forgot to mention how much I love her friendship with Sev ;)
person LilCas
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg omg omg omg Keep writing!!!
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what Lucius' father could have possibly wrote that would make him freak out so badly? Could it have to do with DE initiation...betrothal to Narcissa...could his father know about Hermione's true bloodline...The possibilities seem endless. (These are just rhetorical questions, I wouldn't want you to give away too much of your great plot just to satisfy my curiosity :) )

I was glad to see Hermione forgive him, especially now that he is in such an emotionally bad place. But complete absolution can only happen if he seeks it from the other Muggleborn he insulted. I suspect that Lucius is about to receive a large helping of Humble Pie.

Ah! Schadenfreude seems to be the appropriate term, thanks for pointing that out. I studied Spanish because German wasn't an available course at my school, so naturally I wouldn't have known that word.

Looking forward to your next update!
MHS
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor lucius! :( Damn you Abraxas!!! And to think I used to like you!!!

This chapter was brilliant!

Oh I know....*swoons* Tom Felton is the sex =D