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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that movie! No joke, I can always watch it and laugh my arse off every time. Great update. I'm so nervous for Lucius, and for Hermione. Gah! More please!
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was intense. I'm glad that she's forgiven him. I wonder what's with the note from dear ol'dad. If Lucius is frightened, then I think I may have an idea. Great update, I can't wait to see what happens next!
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! He's making him take the mark, isn't he? I know I already said that in the last review but: poor Lucius! Goodness, he needs her so much. I only hope she understands that!
Thank you for that lovely update. I feel so bad for Lucius. Beeing madly in Love with a girl who ignrores him, and now that!
Thank you for that lovely update. I feel so bad for Lucius. Beeing madly in Love with a girl who ignrores him, and now that!
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why are all the best actors English? Simple, you said so yourself! Yanks go ga-ga for the British accent - and Hollywood happens to be over the atlantic in the USA! lol!
There's NOTHING wrong with Snape! Its just that my version of him has a tan, short hair and Neville's temperament! lol!
Thing is, Lucius is supposed to be a gentleman - and a gentleman has manners! Mudblood is like a very violent expletive, and he throws it about a heck of a lot! To say he's probably had 'male finishing school' lessons, his use of such language is really not appropriate to his social standing... not to mention swearing in front of a lady and a child!! He should know what he's done through that alone!
Plus, the way he treats witches is also awful and very bad manners! The love-em-and-leave-em attitude would probably have his Mother spinning in her grave! That's atrocious behaviour - he's not a gentleman, he's a playboy - and I have no time for playboys!
Grovelling is a good tactic.
OMG! What was in that letter to have him break down! Or is it the stress of the past three weeks that's caused it?
Why do I have the impression that those tears have been a long time coming? Poor bloke needed a good cry! We ladies know that a good cry can solve a lot of problems (or at least take the edge off them) - but fellas will bottle it up until they explode like a hydroelectric damn with a hairline crack! I wonder if the last time Lucius was hugged was before his Mother died?
Sometimes it looks like I'm doing a psychology degree! lol!
There's NOTHING wrong with Snape! Its just that my version of him has a tan, short hair and Neville's temperament! lol!
Thing is, Lucius is supposed to be a gentleman - and a gentleman has manners! Mudblood is like a very violent expletive, and he throws it about a heck of a lot! To say he's probably had 'male finishing school' lessons, his use of such language is really not appropriate to his social standing... not to mention swearing in front of a lady and a child!! He should know what he's done through that alone!
Plus, the way he treats witches is also awful and very bad manners! The love-em-and-leave-em attitude would probably have his Mother spinning in her grave! That's atrocious behaviour - he's not a gentleman, he's a playboy - and I have no time for playboys!
Grovelling is a good tactic.
OMG! What was in that letter to have him break down! Or is it the stress of the past three weeks that's caused it?
Why do I have the impression that those tears have been a long time coming? Poor bloke needed a good cry! We ladies know that a good cry can solve a lot of problems (or at least take the edge off them) - but fellas will bottle it up until they explode like a hydroelectric damn with a hairline crack! I wonder if the last time Lucius was hugged was before his Mother died?
Sometimes it looks like I'm doing a psychology degree! lol!
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I am glad that Lucius and Hermione are speaking again. I look forward to reading more to see what the letter contained. I think, since it was from his father, that it might have something to do with taking the dark mark.
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear Author,
I like your story, I like the way you portrayed Lucius, even though he is a bit OoC I think. Though we wouldn't know, since we never really knew what he was like at Hogwarts ;) Except arrogant of course!
I also like your writing style, though there are some points which could be improved. I never liked parts as this "He's Lucius Malfoy, arrogant git, I shouldn't fall for him!" You know, the parts where they talk to themselves, it doesn't appear naturally.
I do hope for an update soon. Keep up the good work!
I like your story, I like the way you portrayed Lucius, even though he is a bit OoC I think. Though we wouldn't know, since we never really knew what he was like at Hogwarts ;) Except arrogant of course!
I also like your writing style, though there are some points which could be improved. I never liked parts as this "He's Lucius Malfoy, arrogant git, I shouldn't fall for him!" You know, the parts where they talk to themselves, it doesn't appear naturally.
I do hope for an update soon. Keep up the good work!
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
he got a letter telling him tat he's going to be a death eater.. is it?
damn.. i was hoping tat owl died on the way sending the letter... lol.. :p
damn.. i was hoping tat owl died on the way sending the letter... lol.. :p
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Spent about 8 months eating nothing but Ramen helping missionaries in Mexico. The stuff gives me nightmares. I'll send bacon instead O.o
Liked chapter 9 =) wondering what the heck the letter said!
"Curiosity killed the cat...
Satisfaction brought it back"
Liked chapter 9 =) wondering what the heck the letter said!
"Curiosity killed the cat...
Satisfaction brought it back"
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! It's something to do with Voldie isn't it? BAD BAD TOMMY!!!
Ok I hate Abraxas even more now, hes obviously upset my Luci!!
Wow what a chapter, it shows Lucius' human side for him to go to pieces over Hermione's treatment, I don't think he's ever had that before. Poor Lucius.
I hope it's not Voldie I really don't....*Looks around and finds Tommy twirling his wand and looking devious* "What have you done?!" Tommy smirks and looks away.... "Nothing dear...Really...Would I do anything to dear Lucius?" .... That man is such a pariah!!!
I loved this chapter!
Update again soon!
~LadyVoldemort87~
Ok I hate Abraxas even more now, hes obviously upset my Luci!!
Wow what a chapter, it shows Lucius' human side for him to go to pieces over Hermione's treatment, I don't think he's ever had that before. Poor Lucius.
I hope it's not Voldie I really don't....*Looks around and finds Tommy twirling his wand and looking devious* "What have you done?!" Tommy smirks and looks away.... "Nothing dear...Really...Would I do anything to dear Lucius?" .... That man is such a pariah!!!
I loved this chapter!
Update again soon!
~LadyVoldemort87~
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg =D
i read 4 chapters in a row today! that is soo cool :D love ya ! xD :D
wow hermione was a lil hysteric but its understandable =)
i like it, things r looking up :D
update soon!
i read 4 chapters in a row today! that is soo cool :D love ya ! xD :D
wow hermione was a lil hysteric but its understandable =)
i like it, things r looking up :D
update soon!