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poor lupin.... n poor poor lucius...

you make me want to cry seeing lucius like that...

sob sob *.*

This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.

Hey
I'm loving your story so much that I've read it all in one go. I like how you've portrayed Lucius in the story; if only he was real :D
I really hope you're going to bring the next chapter out soon!

Aaah! A lovely way to wind down in the evening :) Eagerly anticipating the next chapter! X

Oh you made my night with that update! I am working on a paper for Uni and I really have to get it ready! So to motivate myself, I work for 45 minutes to an hour, and then browse a bit... That was definitly a good break this time!

I could have told you I knew it! Hah, Voldi is back. Poor Lucius. Although I am not such a softy when it comes to physical pain (as long as it is not inflicted on me at least ;-)) but emotional pain. I guess the saying "Once bitten twice shy" does account for me, too? Whatever...

Hermione will be so devasted when he comes back! But at least she knows from his reaction to the letter that he didn't want to go! Oh his father is just such a sissy. Who could impose something like that on his child. It makes me angry even though it's only fiction.

Your update was short but loveley, so don't apologise for it! Already waiting for the next one :-)

Chapter 11: Well, that was unpleasant. He DID get the dark mark. I was worried that Hermione wouldn

I can see why Lucius took the mark. Say yes and hope to God that there won't be any more pain. Great update, I wonder what Hermione's reaction is going to be?

poor lucius

This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more. I hope that Hermione will understand why he took the mark, if she discovers it on him. I don't think that he wants to tell her for fear of losing her. I loved how you made Voldemort look as he does in Hermione's own time, no one really knows for sure what he looked like in Lucius' time. I also noticed that you had Bellatrix there, isn't she younger than Lucius.

Poor Luci =(

Yes Abraxas! It is a little too late you blond fool!

Did I tell you how much I loved this chapter?...No....Well I did! My Tommy's going to be punished for hurting Luci like that...Wheres that whip? *looks around room...THERE IT IS!* *turns to look at the Dark Lord...* "Are you scared, Tommy...Because you should be!" mwhahahahahaha LMAO.

Brilliant this chapter, Brilliant I tell ya!

~LadyVoldemort87~