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so sad but well done so far I look forward to more let me know ok

Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

Please up date soon.

Thank you

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I love this beginning! I hope to see more of it. Thank you for sharing!

dude, i know that one of the songs was "I'm with you" but what were the other ones. amazing story btw, very good wording and i could feel the emotion, very few authors can do that, so very beautiful job

Wow. Interesting. The songs were very nice. Who wrote them? I myself am attempting my hand at writing. That last story kind of sounded like a song could be written using that as a base or starting point. My father is the Lead Vocals/Guitarist/Bass Guitarist/Keyboardist in his band and my brother plays the drums. They have a record deal and he asked me to write a song. Hopefully I can make him proud. lol. I love thos story I hope that my fanfics and original fiction will turn out as great as this seems to be. Absolutely Wonderful. Hope to see an update soon.
Ja
Sakura Chang-Maxwell-Yuy
Sakura Maxwell-Minamino
Eternity

I like it so far. maybe u dnt hav 2 put in the sub stories and songs....for chapter 2 it was alrite...maybe more substance and plot?? some more sex couldn't hurt...just suggestions, follow them if u want.

I love your story I really do but I figure as a fan I should warn you. You need to add I do not make money from this story in your disclaimer. The admins are really cracking down on that. *Sighs* I still have to repost Lion's locket.. I should probably check all my other disclaimers too...