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i would love it if you added more

 

Absolutely loved these three chapters! Well written, seamlessly flowed together. Love a happy Severus!! Well done!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

lmao that was great! i loved how you ended that last bit with the children question

Oh I loved it! What a great ending! Thank you so much for sharing!!

A wonderful story and a brilliant third chapter!!!!

I love this story! It's up to you if you want to end it, but it would be interesting to see how they deal with a possibility of pregnancy. Snape with his fear of having kids and Hermione, even though she may want them, not feeling as if she is prepared for them at that moment. And then there is the newly single Ron. What will he be doing now that Ginger, the vapid blonde bimbo is out of his picture, so to say? And what about Ginger? Will she be wanting revenge now that Ron has seen her for what she is? You have questions that you could be answering, but it's up to you if you want to go on or not. It's a great story and I hope to be reading more of your work in the future.

I like it. Please update soon.

Great chapters so far can't wait for more.
Cannon who the hell cares if the story and
charaters are written well and it flows with the story
great work update soon please

Des

lovely story and beautifully written