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for Ultimate Betrayal

by KaiDragon

schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, bad Narcissa! You'll get yourself killed!

Oh well, might be too late for that.
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Crap!!! Narcissa knows about aiden!! Crap!!! That is VERY bad!! EKKK! I love the chapter!!! More please!!
person rainbow2007
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oops! Poor Cissy... not. ;)
person poohbear74
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter and I hope Cissy gets what is coming to her!
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i was looking thoigh stories and came across this one, i am glad i did. cant wait for the next chapter. if u are sending out emails can u send me on... xxxdollydellexxx@hotmail.com
keep it up!
~dolly
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Totally a public sentencing for ron hermonie and the others!!! I like siri and remi i think they should know but there will be some drama about themcalling aiden, aiden. I love it!!! More please!!
person alma
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person rainbow2007
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it
person Leentjef
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very verygood chapter
and let sirus and remus know its harry
keep going and post soon
bye bye