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for Ultimate Betrayal

by KaiDragon

person poohbear74
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!, the plot thickens!
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! more please!!!!
person alma
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
person Jan
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I wanted Voldy to kill that elf cunt, but that last paragraph sounded better, have Wyatt kill her in the most painful way as possible *rubs hands together, while an evil malicious gleam appears both into my eyes, and onto my grin*

Please update chapter 51 soon ^_^

Jan

person rainbow2007
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it
person Darkless
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As if Harry/Aiden wasn't stressed enough, now Narcissa had to throw a hissy-fit and hie back to Britian. Harry's cover is about to be blown...the proverbial 'shit' is about to hit the fan! Keep those calming potions handy, Sev.
person Leentjef
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very good chapter kep going and post soon
bye bye
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story except for how Aiden and Wyatt seem to be tyrants.
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol well that was wow...poor little Cissa. The green eyed monster will do that to ya
person alma
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.