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for Ultimate Betrayal

by KaiDragon

person poohbear74
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!
What a great way to start a story!

please email me with updates at poohnation74@yahoo.com.

it's seems to be a great story.
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. I hope for more soon. Good job on the intro.

Kelly
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...maybe the Demons will allow Voldemort to THINK he is running the show, wizard or not, he is still only a human. Great story, hope to see more soon.
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooo! This is really good!!! i can't wait for more!
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um. I like this but when's Harry Getting out of Jail
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! I can't wait for more!!
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn he is pissed isn't he. cant wait to read more
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it keep goig but when is Harry getting out.
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now this is a good story so far. Plz update soon
person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to read more...love it so far and a great beginning.
You go Harry!!!...(at the end of the chapter)
...I like to see what they do with out his help...love it!