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for Ultimate Betrayal

by KaiDragon

schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool. Loved Harry's animagus form!
person Jan
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Please update chapter 7 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. More soon.
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting more exciting! Update soon! Pleasseeee!!!
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought that you would have Sirius and Remus believe in Harry, with the way you said Sirius is alive *pouts*

Will it be long till Harry and Wyatt meet?

I LOVE IT!!! Do continue really soon!
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was awesome!! I can't wait for more!!
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Can't wait for more.
person Jan
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is awesome! Though I can't believe both Sirius and Remus not believing in Harry!!! I hope you have a painful death coming to them!!! *Looks hopeful up at KaiDragon*

Please update chapter 6 soon ^_^

Jan
person poohbear74
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER AND I CAN NOT WAIT FOR MORE!

I hope Harry and Wyatt are mates.
Neville is not so dumb and Moody is right Neville is not the chosen one and they will be dead soon.
person alma
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, the vampire sounds hot!