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for Ultimate Betrayal

by KaiDragon

schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MAN the game is afoot. loved this and cant wait to read more hopefully soon
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the name. It's sounds so reagal, yet I can picture him being called Aiden Kage in a sort of rebellious tone.
person MrGalion
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to next update
person poohbear74
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!

I can't wait to see their faces when Harry comes back and don't help them!
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ugh i really hate the wizarding world right now, why do they have to be so mean to harry. and i cant wait to see wyatt and harry meet. cant wait to read more
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good ^_^ cant wait to hear more
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! i can't wait for more! I love the amazing background you've given!
person Flare
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is great please keep it up cause i can't wait to see how this is going to turn out!
person alma
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, can't wait until they meet.
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice..I'm loving it...Harry is beautiful no matter what he looks like on the outside...And what about this magic boost?How strong we talking here?