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for Ultimate Betrayal

by KaiDragon

schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's taken me all day.. to read this.. with all the interruptions.. but damn.. I like this.. and glad that Severus isn't with Narcissa... That Sirius and Remus really were on Harry's side..

I could go on..Just can't wait to read the next installment..
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Danger is coming. You better not have Aiden kidnap.

When will Sirius and Remus know about Harry?

Update soon please!
person Vitki
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, good luck Moldyworts! I looooove this story, good writing, good plot, hot boys...what else is needed? Please update soon, and I totally get the winter rant! Ew...winter, snow, shoveling, cold...wah!
person YanaYugi
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
run harry run
person Leentjef
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter keep going and post soon
bye bye
person rainbow2007
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it.
person poohbear74
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just hope that you are warm and okay.

Another great chapter and I just hope that Voldie knows that he will die a painful death.
person alma
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!
What a great story so far!

please email me when you update at no1wag@hotmail.com.

I can't wait to read more.
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, I sense trouble.
I really do hope Harry/Aiden will tell Sirius and Remus his secrets, since his cover will be out soon anyway.

Update soon!!