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for Ultimate Betrayal

by KaiDragon

schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Snorts* They don't even sound remorseful over what happened to Harry, even after finding out the truth! Grrr...
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad the vampire knows Harry belongs to Wyatt. I hope to see Draco with Chris, wherever you have them meet. I like for Draco to be given a chance to be good, even if Lucius is on Voldy's side. Sirius knows Harry was innocent, yet showed no remorse. When Harry, Chris, and Wyatt come there, I hope he doesn't forgive them. Thanks.
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeesh, the order members are really a bunch of bastards, aren't they? Especially Sirius needs a good (or rather really bad) hexing. The meeting between Aiden and Wyatt was great. I hope they'll meet again soon. Could you have Snape, and maybe a Malfoy or two, join them in America? And more of Zion too please; he's hot ^^. And pair him with Snape maybe? Could work! :3

Loved it! Can't wait for more :)
person Anon
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hope to see more soooooooooon!!! ^_^
person 261012
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it
person poohbear74
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WELL, I CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER AND WHAT IS TO HAPPEN NEXT.
person windlg84
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update soon
person Jan
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope Voldy doesn't find out that it's Lucius and Severus that are his spies!!! If so, I at least hope that they get to get away before the bastard kills them!

Please update chapter 10 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the new chapter. I can't wait for more.
person rellenh
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice!