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for Ultimate Betrayal

by KaiDragon

schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh man wyatt had better watch what he says to harry. if he says the wrong thing then harry will close up like a clam and run man this is getting so good i cant wait to read more
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think that all those sweets have rotted his brain or something. this is getting very intresting. cant wait to read more
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! you updated!!!! I can't wait for more!!!
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Grumbles* Damn that old man. Oh yes, lets just go off and kidnap the legendary Charmed ones. Even if he managed to succeed, he'd have to find a way to actually get them to fight while they are over in England. They could always just sit down and watch the show, never taking a part in it.
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, Dumbledore is going to get himself into a whole lot of trouble! Serves him right if it get's him killed *evil grin* Glad that Wyatt knows the truth about Harry/Aidens identity. Can't wait to what happens when those four arrive in America. Keep it up! :)
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lemme guess. Albus is killing his brain cells thru lemon drops, because he's gone NUCKING FUTS!!!
He's going to get everyone killed (not that Albus doesn't deserve a swift kick in the jewels for what he did to Harry).

He's supposed to be so smart. Doesn't he KNOW about the 'twice blessed' child & who birthed him?
And the bastard claims to know everything about magic. Idiot.
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahaa man harry is getting evil towards them now but they deserve it. and harry has the approval of the family so it is all good... YEA cant wait to read more
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha...they did have to go..They weren't very grateful
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love Harry's temper, hehe.

Update soon.
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Malfoys, what will we do with you. Don't they realize the safety they are being provided? Morons...