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for Ultimate Betrayal

by KaiDragon

schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wait! Take that back! I vote "Chris H./ Neville L." and "Draco M./Zion"
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chris and Draco. Can you give us Draco's reaction to seeing Chris orb in in all his fury? HoT! Zion can have Neville or Luna. Please Chris and Draco. Dumbledore messed up big time! I can see Wyatt confronting them with Chris by his side. I can even see the torch.
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't mind Chris and Neville. Draco is behaving like such a brat - I'd like to see him de-aged so that he might actually have a chance to GROW UP! Maybe we could off Narcissa too. Those two transition much too easily from begging favors to making demands.
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! Ok, so for my votes...Chris H./Neville and Draco/Zion. And could you please, please, please not hurt Sev! He's my favorite character! I'll still read even if you do, but I'll be really sad.
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE what you have so far for this story. I can't wait till you update again.

I would like Draco/Chris for the pairing.
person Jan
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can Dumbledore be more of an idiot? I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! Will Harry be forced to reunite with his godfather and pet wolf?

Please update chapter 15 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GOOD chapters.
person alma
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
person alma
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
person poohbear74
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just great!!!!!!!!!!

I can't wait for them in Britain to realize that they made the dark lord able to win.