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for Ultimate Betrayal

by KaiDragon

schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It is so good!! Want more! Oh and I also think Chris/Draco would be real hot! Zion/Twins too!
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You really do ahve to pity Neville. He's stuck in his cell with the idiots and the Twins. Why in hell would the Twins follow Dumbljerk? I thought they would be smart than that.
person Arishaa
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Love it! All the royal stuff is so cool... anyway, my vote is for Chris/Neville. Neville has put up with so much, it'd be great if he could catch a break! And this would make him and Harry brothers, which I suppose I could see Draco being but not really - just for me it would be better if it was Neville. Anyway, look forward to more, thanks lots!
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! you update soo fast, not that that's not a good thing. It's a very good thing. Keep it up i say! hehe

Chris/Neville AND Draco/Zion
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to say Draco/Zion! That'd be hot...don't know who I want for Chris though.
person poohbear74
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They have just made a big mistake in trying to take Wyatt's mother and aunts!!!!!!!!!!
another great chapter and I can not wait for the next one!
person poohbear74
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to give in my vote, Chris H./ Draco M. there it is.
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its amazing.
Your an amazing writer as a matter of fact.
For real.
I can stop reading your story so thank you/.]
PLEASE
PLEAS
PLEASE
update soon.
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PS my vote is for Chris/Neville story.
I think that would be appropriate.
Draco is too annoying and snobbish for Chris.
Not to mention Harry wouldn't be able to stand him in the family.
Neville on the other hand would be amazing with Chris.
There both really nice guys and quite the heroes.
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person llyoung
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Draco/Zion/Chris
person Elisel
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chris/draco