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by KaiDragon

schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chappie!

Chris/Neville

Draco/Zion
person kanaro
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! And I love how quickly you update! Anyway, my vote would have to be Chris/Neville all the way, and maybe a side ordering of Draco/Zion.
person Jan
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Leo, but I can't say that I feel sorry for him. He deserves to be treated as such, I never liked the idea of him leaving his family.

Please update chapter 21 soon ^_^

Jan

Votes:
Chris/Neville
Draco/Zion
person poohbear74
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how many times i can vote, but here goes

Chris/Neville, Draco/Zion please

wonder what happens when storm gets hungry
person MrGalion
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good writing
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chis/Neville & Draco/Zion.
person MrGalion
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy god nice update speed.
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! That's so awesome!! Chris/draco and I guess I wouldn't mind Neville/Zion but you did mention that neville had a girlfriend!
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Draco definitely likes Chris and Chris has noticed Draco..even in the caos.