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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job.
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Chris, He was trying to help in his own way!
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Severus is free of his mark. Maybe now he can stand beside Aiden during the ceremony.
As for the poll; my votes go to Chris/Draco and Zion/Twins. I can
As for the poll; my votes go to Chris/Draco and Zion/Twins. I can
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't think of anything to put in this review. I still love your story, and I check it everytime I go into adult fan fiction (which is often 3times a day because Uni life allows for free time). I still like the pairings. I can't wait to see their wedding, and I can't wait to see what happens between Avalon and Britain.
One thing I will comment on is the sudden changes in Harry's submissiveness to more assertive. He has jumped, in the space of a few chapters, from showing dominance and his argumentative side to playful (which admittedly isn't a huge leap) then to completely submissive. The way you set out his character at the start suggested he was going to be as equal as one can be to a king. This chapter saw his more submissive side, which I like, but at the same time seemed slightly strange.
Still, I look forward to the next update!
One thing I will comment on is the sudden changes in Harry's submissiveness to more assertive. He has jumped, in the space of a few chapters, from showing dominance and his argumentative side to playful (which admittedly isn't a huge leap) then to completely submissive. The way you set out his character at the start suggested he was going to be as equal as one can be to a king. This chapter saw his more submissive side, which I like, but at the same time seemed slightly strange.
Still, I look forward to the next update!
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps getting better i EGERLY await each update. Please keep them coming. Will Aiden bring the twins into the fold? PLEASE say yes they are my most favorite Wesley's followed by Charlie and Bill.
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the Chris/Draco pairing. But I was wondering if possible and it fit your story idea if Zion could also be paired with someone - I really like this OC of yours.
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HEHE! I love it!! I can't wait for more!!!
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll say it again; poor Severus ;) I like this Tamara, and I'm curious to see how you'll make everything work out for Severus. And *yay* Chris/Draco won the poll! I can't wait to see how these two hook up. They can both be such prats *grin*
I pity the British wizards (well some of them, not all, of course) they don't stand a chance against Avalon and America. Especially with an idiotic and fudging Fudge to lead them; he's not the sharpest quill in the box is he? *snicker*
Great reading! More please?
I pity the British wizards (well some of them, not all, of course) they don't stand a chance against Avalon and America. Especially with an idiotic and fudging Fudge to lead them; he's not the sharpest quill in the box is he? *snicker*
Great reading! More please?
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So are you going to pair Neville up with Zion? I hope you do, cuz well, I don't want him to be lonely. hehe
more soon!
more soon!
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!!!!!!!!!