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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh Chris.
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous as always. Could you maybe off Narcissa and let Sev be with someone who isn't a stuck-up bitch who thinks the world is beneath her? Please?
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to the pairings!
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter!
I can not wait for the wedding and coronation!
I can not wait for the wedding and coronation!
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Huh...well...I guess I...Still like it, but there wasn't as much excitement in this chapter as there was in all the others. I can't wait to see how Wyatt will react to what Chris said. I guess my answers to my query will be given soon then. It was mean of Chris to say that though. And what's wrong with HArry showing submissiveness in public? Everyone knows he's strong and the only thing that makes him submissive really is Wyatt so I don't see why Chris should complain. But, again, I can't wait to see how this all turns out. And where had Aiden gone? BAck to his house? I thought you couldn't get out of Avalon because it was in lockdown?
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh boy!! can't wait for more!!
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love it. I was on the edge of my seat waiting to see what wyatt did to chris. he shouldn't have said anything til wyatt was there to give them the ok. you can't just leave it there! please,please,pretty please. update soon! I have to know what happen's!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can you make the butt whipping chris is about to get a little bit painfully? ;)
~LadyVaughan
~LadyVaughan
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What doll comment? Last I knew they were teasing each other over forgetting about Snape and the prisoners.
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, but I do feel sorry for Chris, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! (chuckles)
I feel like there should be a part where Severus and Tamara are together... maybe even have Tamara steel Sev from Narcissa, I mean I like her and all but she's to stuck up! I feel that he'd do better with someone more down to earth, then one that's been brought up the think she's all high and mighty, and her word is law.
Please update chapter 27 soon ^_^
Jan
I feel like there should be a part where Severus and Tamara are together... maybe even have Tamara steel Sev from Narcissa, I mean I like her and all but she's to stuck up! I feel that he'd do better with someone more down to earth, then one that's been brought up the think she's all high and mighty, and her word is law.
Please update chapter 27 soon ^_^
Jan
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has a good plot and rolls well, though I would reccomend that you use a spell/grammer ceck instead f just a spell check. Sometimes when just using a spell check it will mark words that are spelled right but out of context in the sentence as right even though it's the wrong word it's still spelld igh so it won't say anything about it.