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for Ultimate Betrayal

by KaiDragon

person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...there's the poll results and more chapters...hooray
I missed too much slipping away for a bit...but was happy to catch up.
Wonderful chapters and cant wait to read more.
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
bring back the other Harry please!
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ummmm damn really does he have to be cold I mean I know he should have some control but I would hope that wyatt would be able to bring emotion out of him. It kinda sucks that he will be so calculating from here on out, I am a sucker for happy endings and this fic is awesome but sounds like the ending wont be happy. Still cant wait to find out what happens
person poohbear74
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter but I don't know if I like a Cold Harry.
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I like cold Aiden very much *pouts*

Maybe you could make him cuddly and cute when he's totally alone with Wyatt? You know, romantic times?

But i guess i'll just have to get used to it if you're not going to do that *sighs*
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww...now I miss the old Aiden. Will he get rid of his coldness? Why isn't Wyatt seeking him out? I wish I never said anything about Aiden's change of moods. I don't know whether it prompted you or not but I definately wish I could take it back. I really miss the Aiden who lead everyone else but was overpowered slightly by Wyatt. Still, I love your story still and I won't stop reading it! I can't wait for more updates!
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please!!! Whoa!!! Aiden is cold!
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn the cold harry sends shivers down my back... i liked the warmth and caring harry had but now i think everyone was a fool to do this to him. cant wait to read more hopefully soon
person YanaYugi
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i want Harry's emomotions back
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW...he really put it down..Awesome chapter