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for Ultimate Betrayal

by KaiDragon

schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this chapter!! i am looking forward to what will happen to Kai and Chris
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! Wyatt and Aiden married by the Mother of Magic!! Goodness niether can do anything same can they? PLEASE update soon!!!
person alma
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice ceremony.
Albus & Voldie are SOOOOO screwed.
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So wanting to know how they became immortal

Update soon please!
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*pants* that was hot!! Chris is WAY too nosy!!!! I love it!! Please update soon!!
person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so excited they did it..... hooray.
Darn-tooten-good chapter.
And like always...I so cant wait to read more.
Chris needs to wake up...Draco is so hot for him.
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry. All this mess was Chris and Kai's fault. But, other then questioned, they walked away clean. Yet Harry is the one held reponsible. If a consort is held accountable for their actions, is not a prince also?
person Leentjef
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
new reader

this is a very very good storie, i really like it
i find leo a wimp, i think that the son and father issus must be adressed especially the insident with kris that you told us about.
also convince remus to let his wolf out let an other were wolf convince him and let serius change, i don't like him. he is so not the godfather i had in my mind for harry.
i like you wrinting style and i hope you will post soon an other chapter
keep going and post
bye bye
person poohbear74
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES!
Another great chapter!