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for Ultimate Betrayal

by KaiDragon

person alma
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person poohbear74
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chris still not minding his own business.

Another great chapter!
person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I so love this fic.
The things Storm says...kills me.

As always...cant wait to read more.
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooooo....sum1's angwy >_> CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONES XD
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOO! This is sooo good! Drama drama!!! Chris is going to get himself beat up...BAD! I can't wait for more!!
person alma
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, intense!!! So Chris wanted Aiden for himself.
person poohbear74
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so beautiful and sweet and it was another great chapters!
person Leentjef
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is very very good chapter
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person alma
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, I loved it.
person Jan
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why is it, that everyone else seem happy with their (Wyatt & Aiden's) consummations results, however the Halliwell's seem very unhappy? And what's up with Chris, wanting to talk to everyone when it's non of his business?!

Oh, I can't wait for morning to come! *chuckles* Please update chapter 34 soon ^_^

Jan