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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I love what you have so far and I am always looking forward to new chapters. I have a few questions:
1. Why is Neville not considered innocent of any charges?
2. I think Tamara and Severus should be paired and axe that bitch Narcissa, what a stuck up bitch she is?
3. When are we going to see more action with the other pairings other than Wyatt and Aiden?
1. Why is Neville not considered innocent of any charges?
2. I think Tamara and Severus should be paired and axe that bitch Narcissa, what a stuck up bitch she is?
3. When are we going to see more action with the other pairings other than Wyatt and Aiden?
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Way to go Sev!
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, but you have the bad habit for repeating "in addition, moreover, therefore" over and over through out your chapters, in one chapter I read in addition over twenty if not thirty times! I'm not trying to be a b****h, but I thought I should let you know, cause as one of your readers, this little thing has been getting to me, and maybe other readers of yours as well, I figured it's best to let you know before you lost readers over something as slight as this. *winks* Anyway back to my review, awesome, I love the fact that Severus' been claim as Tamara's, I mean I don't hate Narcissa, but she's just to clinging and needy! Can't wait for a D/C moment as well as Z/N *batting eyelashes suggestively*
Please update chapter 39 soon ^_^
Jan
Please update chapter 39 soon ^_^
Jan
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....another chapter....
Im so excited.
and once again....I cant get enough, and will require more for my addiction.
Im so excited.
and once again....I cant get enough, and will require more for my addiction.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wyatt is really going to have to put Chris in his place. Chris isn't to smart.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oy yay you brought back Tamara, I missed her so. i hope that Chris pulls his head out of his ass soon because it sounds like his brother is ready to kill him. What about the prisoners will they finally be questioned? I hope Storm makes an ice sculptor out of ron and hermoine though they wouldnt make very pretty ones lol. I am loving your story and I cannot wait till your next ^__^
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wyatt should keep his temper down abit, hehe.
When is Zion gonna meet his mate? It's Neville isn't it? Or is it someone else?
When is Zion gonna meet his mate? It's Neville isn't it? Or is it someone else?
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chris is stupid!!! Poor wyatt!! I can't wait for more!!
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very good chapters
but i find leo a coward and he has to make it up to his wife
and kris and wayt have to talk, chris doesn't want aiden but someone who is as close with him than aiden and wayt
please keep wrinting and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
but i find leo a coward and he has to make it up to his wife
and kris and wayt have to talk, chris doesn't want aiden but someone who is as close with him than aiden and wayt
please keep wrinting and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye