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by KaiDragon

schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks again, for both the update and for the answers to my questions. I'm not sure whether to be disappointed or not that Remus nd Sirius are innocent now...I'm feeling rather vindictive and malicious this morning. Kind of wish they had done something horrible but Aiden will be happy to have them back and that in turn will probably help lighten the mood...if he can forgive them that is. Minerva is Dumbledore's wife...this will make for an interesting interrogation. And there was a bit more TLC between Wyatt and Harry so I'm satisfied for now. Can't wait for Neville to come back into it. Poor Draco, no sex, but at least things aren't ruined between him and Chris. Will Severus and Tamara complete the bond...or whatever it is Vampires do with their mates? Narcissa will pitch a fit I bet, I hope Severus doesn't end up with her - Tamara is a much better choice. Anyway, thanks for the update and I'm off to London so I'll check in again soon!
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for sparing my puppies. I'm assuming the spells are still on them since they're not acting like I would picture Sirius acting when he realized he did nothing to help Harry.

Will we find out the same thing fro McGongall? Or maybe Snape is Her baby?
person alma
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, I'm sooooo happy that Aiden will still have his goodfathers.
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! can't wait for more!!!!
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GET HER!!!! war huh good God yall, what is it good for
person Leentjef
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
post soon
bye bye
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is there any chance of sparing Sirius and Remus> And what happened to McGongall? I thought she was next.
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha! Sucks to be her!

Thanks for the update, you've really made my day. So far I've had a rubbish time (uni has messed absolutely everything up! I mean come on, 3 final assessments 5weeks into term and still no word of where we are going for the placement in two weeks! They're stupid!) Anyway, do you know what just occured to me? We haven't seen Aiden and Wyatt enjoy each other's company much, not without it ending in an argument or them suddenly becoming cold emotionally. I kow there's war coming and I know it's a tough time but I think they need a break in a while. Didn't get to see Neville either this chapter but seeing Hermione getting her sentence was worth it. Can't wait for Dumbledore's. Will Aiden be able to make it past his occulumency shields? Will Dumbledore discover that Harry Potter is actually alive and well? You mentioned last chapter or the one before that something changed in Harry's magic, what was it?

I can't wait for your next update. We've got, what, 4 people, not including Augusta Longbottom, left to interrogate? Sirius, Remus, Dumbledore and Kingsley? That right? Can't wait to see what's been happening in their heads!
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow she is worse then Ron I didnt think that was possible, I truly hope she gets tortured but before that i hope she gets shown that she is a nitwit because she sure as hell isnt as smart as she thinks she is. Cant wait for another update you make my day ^_^
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! Poor aiden how is he keeping it together??? More please!!!!