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for Ultimate Betrayal

by KaiDragon

person Leentjef
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter
keep going and post soon
bye bye
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My guess as to Aidan's shift in magic is that he is pregnant. Great chapter! I love this story!
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it, now that jujst make my day, learning sirius and remus is not in there right mind when they turn from harry. it the chatper i like most so far! Now am guessing Harry is Pregnant right? that's why his magic is going crazy and why the mother of magic is so smug right? question is it only going to be one or twins or more? can't wait for the next chapter, I love this story! PLEASE,PLEASE,PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
smiling "the magic shift and the smug feeling wyatt gets from magic is that harry is preggers...personally i cant wait to see what they do bumbledork, i think that they should take away his magic put him in a cell and let him watch clips of their day. how severus is now free and finding happyness, how the twins are going to go free, how nev is mated to a vamp, how dogfather and wolf are free of him and now he cant tell them what to do.... cant wait to read more
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sirius and Remus are innocents!! I could kiss you! In fact i will do that right now! MUUAAHHHH!!!! *giggles* I do hope Aiden will forgive them though. Hmm..wonder if Aiden will tell them that he's Harry..and their reactions
Ooohhhh is that what i think Aiden might be? pregnant?
And i'll take it as you promising me to torture Hermione slowly painfully badly, hehe. It'll be so much fun *evil laughs*
person rainbow2007
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it. please let minerva be under spells too.
person poohbear74
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope I get this right, Harry is pregnant!

Another great chapter!
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I feel so bad for Siri and Remus.
I wonder what is gonna happen when they find out exactly what they did to Harry!
Of Course they have it coming.

Can't wait to see what happens with McGonagall.
BTW, you misspelled GUARDS. You seem to have switched the a and u around.
person llyoung
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for making Remus and Sirius innocent.
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Minerva. Love the story. Hope for more soon.