rate_review Reviews

weird story, hot but weird

I was almost hoping Draco would confess his dying love for Harry. But I think your ending is better. Justice.
Great job on the story.

I enjoyed this story -- alot. It was well written and seemed to be thought out. I wasn't too sure of the eventual ending as I thought that Harry's whereabouts should have been told. But overall, this is one of which you should be proud!

--RD

That was great. I would have really loved to read a bit more of Hole, or even have Harry in a part of the epilogue confronting Draco, but it is your story and you wrote it well. Thank you for finishing it :D

loved the ending!!!! keep up the good work on anything else you do!!!!!!!!!!1111

Actually I think the epilogue is VERY...odd...maybe I see Lupid differently, though I understand after very tragic and horrible experience anyone will change...

I don't see the origins of problems is the fault of Draco, yet he is the one being punished...I believe others bear greater responsibilities, such as McNair and Lucius or those MOM ministers...it is obvious that the Order of Phoneix become others' slaves are their works...the epilogue seems to me that apart from Harry, you would like to put Draco under slave spell...

Sorry that I have so much naggings to write...yet seeing a good story ended badly is an unhappy experience...

love this story!!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!

can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well it seems more players are in place and set. Let's hope Harry hasn't expelled his bead.

Again, quite the story, enjoying it so far, het included.

--RD