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schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man the mental image of Hermione punching Lavender out made me laugh out loud! You are HILARIOUS! And I giggled a bit when Ginny decked Lav Lave too....I needed a good giggle!

Well done for two lovely chappies!
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting story! looking forward to the next chapters:)
person Ms_Figg
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If you want to see a manip of how I see Dudley in my mind, visit this link: http://www.theburningpen.com/images/dudley.jpg

The Dudley in the books is blonde so I maniped that in as well. :)
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this fic is my new favourite! Poor Dudley being scared of ickle house elves! I can't wait to see how he further progresses in his life at Hogwarts and how he deals with grumpy bum Snape!

Wel done!
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh maaaaaaaaaaaaan what a teriff start to a New Mrs Figg fic! I really like Petunia's Promise and like what I think this fic could be!

I look forward to future chappies!
person dudley
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really...I never thought dudley could be an interesting character. Give us some more, please...?
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ms_Figg:

HA! I knew you couldn't stay away from the SS/HG ship for very long. Looks like someone is getting their mojo back! :)

Hmmm! Snape owing Hermione a life debt that he is not all that fired up to make good on. That could get very interesting. What would she require of him if he tries to circumvent his debt to her, will things just get nasty, or will they heat up? Oh the possibilities!

Loving the spin you've put on JKR's existing story. The gaping plot holes JKR left us with are seemingly endless. I look forward to seeing what you will come up with.

Thanks (as always) for the great read!
MHS
person Briappletree
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, I like this idea.

:D :D :D Can't wait for more. :3
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say, WOW?

This is really great... I'm loving your Dudley!

Man, I can foresee a great story from this, if you wanted to continue with this train of thought. =) It's certainly different from anything I've ever read.

I love love love this!
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ms_Figg:

Interesting expansion on "Petunia's Promise". I liked how you elaborated on what happened to the Dursleys after they all left Privet Drive for the last time. Turns out that Dudley wasn't the heartless bastard he was in 6 of the 7 books. Looks like he finally developed a conscience there at the end. It was good to see him give Vernon what-for...family is family, and they should stick together when times get tough. I never really liked that self-serving SOB Vernon anyways! And Petunia...that woman needs to grow a spine, REALLY!

I hope to see your return to the SS/HG realm soon. Perhaps these recent one-shots are what you needed to get back in the groove.

Looking forward to more great work from you!
MHS