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for Staring Problem

by kadiele

schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh how lovely!
person Anon
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee, I think I'd have a staring problem too, and a smartarse comment to make sure he came back for more as well. LOL Very delish! :)
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was delicious!! Very Hot!!!

Great job!!

LadyB
xoxo
person Rosamund
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot story...and perfect ending ;) Loved the line.
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was just so h-o-t! It was full of passion and lust and passion and did I say it was hot! Lol I think I
person jaimelee
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome one shot! Very very hot! You should write a sequel... I could totally see them taking it further...