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for A Family Forgotten

by Dreamwind

schedule December 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Actually, for this particular kind of cross-over, having such a well detailed explanation of why the Wizarding World abhors necromancy (combined with an awesome Dementor origin and ghoul origin) is so completely brilliant! I love how you tied in Anita's ardeur and her anger-swallowing powers (which are being blamed on her necromancy even by her and Jean-Claude in canon). I am curious how you'll resolve the fact that if Anita doesn't purposely use her powers they go off at random, especially since she's been doing it since she was a young child.

schedule May 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
good crossover. I hope you get the chance to return and complete it and your others.
schedule March 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, I can hardly wait for more! Please update soon.
person 2mStone
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please please update this story! Its fabulous! I cant help but love it!
person Jennifer
schedule September 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
schedule June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
person nekochan
schedule June 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Do you still work on this story because it's been long time that you haven't updated. Too long too wait.
person 2mStone
schedule December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
nooo! it cant end there! please please please update soon! I am absolutely in love with this story!
schedule August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, though it does have me conflicted... Anita is one of my favorite characters and Richard not so much and seeing them act so OOC (Well Anita at least) had me at the edge of clicking the exit button, but the fact that this is one of the better fanfics for this category held my hand. I hope I don't come off as flaming because I'm not trying to... Oh I have some questions that I hope you will answer, is Anita going to be the over all bad guy in this fic? And what about the animators/necromancers? In the Anita Blake series it was a natural born talent that had to be used or it will leak and use itself, are you still going along with that or is it something different like they are born with a type of magic and they just use it to raise the dead? Are there two types of Necromancer/Animators the kind that Harry was talking about and the kind that Anita is or are they one and the same? And wouldn't Harry's option of Anita be biased because they are natural enemies? You don't ask a mouse if a cat is evil (or vis versa) cause the answer would obviously be yes... Oh and would Jean-Claude stop associating with Anita, he himself said that her behavior changed once she got the aduer so is it really her necromancy that is changing her? And what of Damian, he needs Anita to stay sane but Harry seems to be blocking her from everyone, is he okay? I hope you can answer some of these questions for me.
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
all 13 chapters are great so far. i admit i've never read anita blake vampire hunter, but this story is awesome.