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I like it. Please update soon.

Chapter one proves interesting. Without reading further (though I will) I must surmise at the moment she has fallen under some spell that has enabled her to see the "true image" of people, perhaps what they hide under their glamours as such. That would explain the mediwitch and Snape. Obviously Luna would not wear a glamour, she's too perfect for that (I love that queen of not normal) but do so many of the other students glamour themselves? I suppose they could, even simple ones to hide blemishes or imperfections that they feel they find in their appearance. I guess I'll have to read on to see. But good work thus far.

~CC

Eep. She kissed him. And chapter two wasn't that bad either.

~CC

Chapter Six should so be re-titled: "Confessions of a Drunken Snape" :-p But bravo for that little bit. You've managed to still keep his character while under the influence, without making him a total slurring dunderhead. Far too many stories come across my eyes where Severus imbibes too much and is no longer Severus, but a wanton, drunken fool playing to the character of the alcohol rather than his own character under the effects of it. It's difficult to do well, but you have done so, my compliments to you here.

~CC

Naughty. But a happy ending for all. Except Ron. But who cares. Ron is such crap. I am most pleased with your subtle little slide of Albus in there, not admitting what he'd done. Over all, I am genuinely happy that I stumbled across this story. Good job.

~CC

I like it. Please update soon.

Haha, wow. What a jump. I look forward to more! ~M

I am loving this story more and more with every chapter that I read. You are doing a lovely job with it.
-luvsev

Detention... sounds very promising. *waits paitently* For this take your time, hunni.

I like it. Please update soon.