rate_review Reviews

lovely. thanks so much

That is a really interesting spell, and book. It was a very lovely story and I'm glad they're back together. Poor Ron though. =)

i thought the ending could have used a little something extra, but otherwise it was pretty good story.

A few cringe factors early on (I would be the witchy-come-lately to this story), but what can you do? With these two, there has to be a cringe factor sooner or later. You won me over in the end. Good story.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

o that was great! but it was so heart breaking to read that he was giving up excellent work

I just started reading this story yesterday [10/28/08] and have noted so far that you started out a little shaky, but seem to have gotten the hang of writing since then. Reading your A/N at the bottom of ch. 10, about the sex scene ... don't worry yourself! There is no need to sensationalize the sex/romance. These are new lovers, Hermione is only 17, and from what I've read so far, their actions have been brought on by an affectionate attraction, a loving kindness, not some vindictive lust craze or deviant sexual experimentation. Lovingly exploring each other sexually is a beautiful thing ... spanking, pinching, biting and rutting like animals is all effects. Write what you're comfortable with.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

awww that was cute

I like it. Please update soon.