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hi, ...that was hot! u should change ur name into "king of hotness"!!!

keep up and pls update soon!

(u wouldn't know anyone who has saved "the weasley saga" and could mail it to me?)

Decent chapter, but not your best; I noticed a larger number of grammatical errors than usual, and, to be honest, you need to work on your transitions; the constant dip in and out of memory wasn't very well done and was rather jarring to the flow of the story. I'm not trying to be nasty about it, just trying to provide some ConCrit. Hell, I'd offer to beta for you, if you're interested.

Now, least you get the feeling that I didn't enjoy the chapter, I did; the image of Luna and Ginny with the big dildo was extremely arousing, and the sheer sensuality present throughout was well executed; this is not IKEA Erotica, IMHO. Xenophilius was well done, and I wonder if you're going to take his name literally, Xeno- meaning "stranger" and "philius" meaning "lover", i.e. Lover of the Strange; if you so choose, you could use him as a entry point for all sorts of "interesting" sex and acts. And given his obvious interest in Ginny, I could see a scene with the Lovegoods visiting the Weasleys, and Xenophilius and Arthur sharing (and successively sandwiching) their daughters. The suggestion at the end of another gangbang by the twins, Ron and Percy is interesting, and I wonder if that's going to be a tease or if we'll get to see it. Already looking forward to the next chapter. --LS

Hi, good chapter. Can ya include clearly description about the butt-sex. After anal-sex, can suck the cock out to drink cum or not, clean the cock out, same as vagina. Can be dirty or not, not as wholly water-out from the butt. To see clear water as it go out. But would be kinky if dirty. Can explain t o reader if clean or not??

O.O
*awkward cough*
hem, hem...
(wow, that almost sounded like Umbridge O.o)
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anyway!
great story so far.
talk about incest...
although i do look forward to when ginny goes to hogwarts.
what about harry! he's all alone!
hopefully he gets some in the next chapter hahahaha!
from who? i dont care, as long as the sex is yummy...
is this pretty much a PWP, though?

Were is the next chapter(S).... I like your other work.... dont end this one too soon

I really think you should continue! I want to know what's going to happen at school.

hi, your stories are wonderful! loved this story and hope for a quick update!


(btw, i'm looking for a story called "the weasley saga". could you help me?)

Hmm... Fun, but I'll admit that I'm looking forward to a Harry/Ginny/Ron DP scene. The bit with McGonagall also took me by surprise, to be completely honest.

good story, can't wait fot the next update, maybe you can put me on the alert list so i could know when you're updating..anyways keep up the good work.

You never fail to deliver, that was so hot. I wish you could update everyday :)