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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that is just afall. how could you do that? i do hope that everything will eventually be okay! dracos little angel! do post soon and let us know what is to become of the little girl!
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! (well obviously not the drowning) I can't wait for more. Please please please update soon! :)
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is good and well writte for the most part however it does tend to get alil confusing at first when you even with the line break jump to a memory or flashback with out letting us now when this flash back accured like say 3 week artfer ron and Hermione started dating or april 1998 forbiddin forrest something like that would make it a lot easier to read. But its your story if you trying to make us confused to werre we have to read it 2-3 times to get it straight then your doing a great job at it other than that keep up the good work
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is one of the most offensive things I have ever read. I have no objection to graphic violence and sex but I have every objection to the complete trivialisation of the serious problems of domestic violence and abuse. Not one character in this story has anything like a normal, moral response to the outrageous things done to Hermione. Why, when Hermione is finally thrown out of her home, doesn't she (or more likely Harry and Ginny) have Ron arrested? When Lavender admits her role in the abuse, why doesn't Draco urge her to tell the Aurors?
If you are going to write about issues like this, at least have the guts to do it properly, in a way that explores the real emotional struggles associated with this kind of relationship. But to use domestic violence as an excuse for this kind of shock fic is utterly repellent. You should be ashamed of yourself.
If you are going to write about issues like this, at least have the guts to do it properly, in a way that explores the real emotional struggles associated with this kind of relationship. But to use domestic violence as an excuse for this kind of shock fic is utterly repellent. You should be ashamed of yourself.
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter, yet a bit sad. I hope that Hermione's daughter will be alright. I look forward to reading more.
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aweeeeeeeeeeeeee!
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love how this story is coming and can't wait to read thenext chapter.
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
luved the chapter great cant wait 4 the next one!!!!