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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last first entrance - nice.
Ooh, I like how you've given them each their own personalities even in their heads. Blaise is almost ... funny! Ron is rather pathetic, isn't he? And Harry, well...*smiles warmly*. But Draco! "Perfect. Just perfect. Draco groaned inwardly. Granger had to go and get pretty." ha ha ha. That sounds so like Draco! And to leave us with this: he would make sure the seductress had to suffer too
Ooh, I like how you've given them each their own personalities even in their heads. Blaise is almost ... funny! Ron is rather pathetic, isn't he? And Harry, well...*smiles warmly*. But Draco! "Perfect. Just perfect. Draco groaned inwardly. Granger had to go and get pretty." ha ha ha. That sounds so like Draco! And to leave us with this: he would make sure the seductress had to suffer too
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"electronic flashing message board apparently attached to the front of his trousers". LMAO - poor Ron, I hope he knows what he's doing with Lavender keeping him on such a tight leash. Wonder what's going on between Harry and Hermione and this sensing thing? Have a feeling Ginny won't like that - unles she plans to share him. LOL Seems like some magic of a different kind is floating through the air of Hogwarts seeing as suddenly 'Hermione went and got pretty'. LOL I adore Blaise in fanficdom but I have a feeling one should be very wary of him in this one. :)
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved how everyone(including Pansy) is entranced by her...this should make for a great story...cannot wait to see the pairing...more soon please xxxxxxxxxx
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well you've certainly got my attention. :) Please continue, I'd like to see where this is going. Sounds like fun!!
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good. Pretty good start. I just started my fic not to long ago as well. Have fun with it lol