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for Ring A Ring O' Roses

by Gallivant

schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I didn't realize it a couple of chapters back when you started doing it, but...although Hermione's still calling him "Malfoy," Draco's started calling her "Hermione" instead of "Mrs. Weasley." Heh. I'm thinking that's significant somehow.
person Leslie
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is one of those stories that I find myself reading as slowly as possible, simply because I want savor it and make it last. I really love the suspense; seriously, you do creepy crows better than Stephen King O.o I also really like the way you're easing in to a deepening relationship between Hermione and Draco, rather than the "Wham bam thank you ma'am" styles I've run across in other fics. I'm even digging the older/married versions of them, which really had me kind of skittish at first :) So basically, you're awesome, I should have started this a LONG time ago, you rock, please continue soon, and... you're awesome? Seriously, Iove your writing.
person mhaj78
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Please don't let the chapter be over already! Another fantastic one...I can completely picture Hermione in that dress! Also, you've done a great job of setting up the connection between HGW and DM as more than just physical--a hard thing to do. Great job; what a fantastic story!
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my ... what a fantastic set up for what's to come. and is it me or does ron seem....off? wonderful update.
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
does it any body have a problem with cheating on there husband
person mhaj78
schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loooooving the emotional turmoil that is brewing! fantastic foreplay. :) have i mentioned i'm crazy intrigued by the plot development, too? because i definitely am!
person Marvolo
schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! Love the interaction between Hermione and Draco... things are warming up nicely between them!!! And Henrik is a fun character too. Update soon!
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, and the slow progression of their relationship is very realistic. And...the Ukraine? Is Katya from there?
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. One of the best I've read yet. Please update soon :) Can't wait to find out what happens.
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very edge of your seat...more mystery and suspense...quite well done. you could taste her fear.