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for Muggle Marriage Law 51599

by jacidavy

schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GODS, this thing is getting better and better, and thanks for chapters 16-23, i was so excited that squealed like a fan girl, and oh my the way u hid that jon was not her husband from all of us was brilliant and I was jumping for joy. I loved how they keep getting hiccups to sign the divorce contracts, and how the hell did draco not recognize the girl as his child, and by the way that was one hell of a cliffy when he practically cornered hermione by dragging her to his office. Oh he is going to be really pissed, and just what are those weird dreams that draco has been having. Also I could so feel hermione's pain, and confusion, and draco knows he stills love her, and y oh y hasn't someone said something yet. Also I dont understand how in the beginning she could get over his abuse of her, it riled me up at first, and its like he is a total 180 to that person, and I never saw the change. It just goes to show that the fic is just that good to make ask questions, and have me eagerly anticipating more chapters, so please MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Mehuh
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah ha! About time he put two and two together... too bad Hermione had to hint him by saying "Fo-" Anyway.... great story!! I'll be awaiting!
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fantastic update!! love the new chapters really looking forward to the next update !! ^_^
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!

Thank you for posting this.

This is so good so far....and to make it better I was literally bawling at like the 5-8th chapter..

I love this story

Update soon
person giamarin
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love these chapter!!! I need more!! please update soon
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nooo you always stop it when it's just getting exiting. I now understand everything. Thank you. Guess i just needed to wait for the other chapters to come in. i so want to know how draco will respond to the news. oh i can't wait hurry and update. oh and great job updating so many chapters at once. love it
person KellyJCR
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are killing me with the clifies. I love this story it just keeps getting better and better. I like that there are more elements involved than a regular marriage law story. They just can't realise that they are in love and everything is sunshine a roses. There is a child, a new fiance and muggle life to deal with. I can not tell you how much I love the fact that you post quite a few chapters at a time and you do it so often. Can't wait for more. Well done.
person kittycat30
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm having trouble accepting that Hermione can forgive Draco for all the terrible things he did. He raped her & cheated on her! Somehow, he thinks he has the right to be mad that she had a baby so "soon"... Seriously, he should be grovelling - & if he doesn't, why should she take him back, or stay w/ him? I just don't get it. I do like the story, so don't take this as a flame or anything.
person Verie
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My. Why?! Why!? Why do you have to cut it in there?! Please please fill the chapters soon! please! PLEASE!
person Citten
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh you so have to post another chapter and soon!!! i have just read your story and love it!! so what will happen now. because face it we all know that beautiful little girl is dracos. update soon!!!!! i do hope this is a long story, much longer! :)