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for Muggle Marriage Law 51599

by jacidavy

person Verie
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dont tweak so long! please?

the tension's killing me.
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
TEASE!!! lol

-waits anxiously-
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm hanging for the ending....will it be up tonight?? loved that chapter tho
person kazfeist
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, don't tweak too much...it's looking pretty good already. :D
person kazfeist
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You'd updated so many chapters in just a couple days! I had to go back and reread. I really love the story, and I can't wait for the happy ending! I was fairly worried, in the early chapters, because the transition in emotions seemed a bit forced, to me. But I love the way the story's going now. :D
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Drama, Drama, Drama, Drama.....sigh
I am an emotiona wreck just having read 24-33 chapters, I wanted to scream at hermione for her instance for draco marry celeste (the hoe). I had so many things I wanted to yell at u for, my heart broke so many times, I cried, and I loved the lemons...sigh, I hope u update soon, and i wished the chapters werent that short, and I love Lois perceptiveness, the child is a walking genius, and really dont believe hermione would go to the wedding of the love of her life to someone else, I cant believe she gave in that easy, and I wanted draco to fight her to stay with her, like they fight for everything else....sigh. Great writing , great story. Update
person Nyx716
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To consummate a marriage just means that you have sex not that you have a baby.
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW this story is absolutely brilliant!!!
Great JOB!!! Cannot wait to read whats going on in the backyard.. hmm i think i know ;-)
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's wonderful, it makes me sad to think it's almost done. :)
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the 10 new chapters...

I can't wait until you update.

Just a question:

How can u write so much chapters in one day?